Question

Heres the horrible death metal song I wrote:



Verse 1: In the shadows of despair, where the fallen angels weep, Rising from the ashes, a beast that never sleeps. Flames of destruction, scorch the earth below, In a world of chaos, where the horrors grow. Chorus: Screams of the damned, echo through the night, In this realm of darkness, there is no light. We are the forsaken, the legion of doom, In the abyss we rise, to seal your tomb. Verse 2: Blood-soaked visions, haunt the waking mind, In the crypt of madness, sanity's confined. Chains of torment, bind the souls in pain, In the halls of slaughter, death will reign. Chorus: Screams of the damned, echo through the night, In this realm of darkness, there is no light. We are the forsaken, the legion of doom, In the abyss we rise, to seal your tomb. Bridge: Rivers of crimson, flow through the land, In this eternal nightmare, we make our stand. No mercy, no salvation, just endless decay, In the hellfire's embrace, we waste away. Outro: With a final breath, we curse the skies, In this symphony of suffering, everyone dies. The end is near, the darkness complete, In this kingdom of death, we find our defeat.

Answer 1

Also the Bridge is supposed to be the buildup to the breakdown (Im making the guitar riff and solo for this)

Answer 2

erm honestly this would be a good metal band song :p .

Answer 3

Bro is NOT cannibal corpse!!!!

Answer 4

I can sing it if y'all want 😭

Answer 5

sing

Answer 6

I HATE IT

Answer 7

its so bad 😭

Answer 8

no shooting yourself lmao

Answer 9

Lemme Improvise a solo rq

Answer 10

Well with the right beat it will be good

Answer 11

Imma post 2 more solos

Answer 12

Ok

Answer 13

coolio

Answer 14

BTW y'all like deftones?

Answer 15

OH I can also play Alex G and Lil Peep

Answer 16

All of these songs are great

Answer 17

ouu

Answer 18

Good lyrics, but I want to see it actually have a beat lol

Answer 19

alright nice

Answer 20

cool