Question

Working on a song currently called
“Confessions” feedback is welcome. I always love to understand what I could do to improve:)

“Confessions”
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Tired of the ghost in my room
Sick of the rain feel like I’m crude
Stuck in my ways I feel like I’m losing pero i love what i’m doin’ the music

Only God know’s what i’ve done,
My lord i’m sorry i been through it
Made a few lines, felt i had to do it
It’s the only way I still get through it…

{@copyrighted patent}

Answer 1

LOVE IT! I WANT MOREE!

Answer 2

autis

Answer 3

reallll goodddd!!

Answer 4

cool

Answer 5

:frejard:

Answer 6

its good bro

Answer 7

ermm wat the sigma