dear my dear
I will lay my life down for you
I will give you every piece of me
every single piece
will be in
your hands
your soft delicate hands
they feel like a spring of flowers
my oh my
I wish I could have your hands in mine
till time
ends

Question

somnium · Answer

you're really good at writing, I don't see people splitting lines in poems as much anymore, but the breaks like that give a nice sense of harmony and smoothness in the words. I think it's great

Darling · Answer

@somnium wrote:

you're really good at writing, I don't see people splitting lines in poems as much anymore, but the breaks like that give a nice sense of harmony and smoothness in the words. I think it's great

thank you so much, it truly means a lot to me

unsolvedlife · Answer

pretty good keep the work up

Darling · Answer

@unsolvedlife wrote:

pretty good keep the work up

thank you ^^

unsolvedlife · Answer

@darling wrote:

@unsolvedlife wrote:

pretty good keep the work up

thank you ^^

your welcome ^^

Lilly2010 · Answer

Soo prettyyyy girlyyy goodjobbb keep up the good work

gingy57016 · Answer

you are a good writer this is a good piece

Lilly2010 · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

you are a good writer this is a good piece

real

Darling · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

you are a good writer this is a good piece

thank you <3

gingy57016 · Answer

@darling wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

you are a good writer this is a good piece

thank you <3

ofc keep up the good work

Darling · Answer

@lilly2010 wrote:

Soo prettyyyy girlyyy goodjobbb keep up the good work

thanks pookie wookie :D

Lilly2010 · Answer

@darling wrote:

@lilly2010 wrote:

Soo prettyyyy girlyyy goodjobbb keep up the good work

thanks pookie wookie :D

Ofcccc girlyyyy

hellokitty265 · Answer

nice