Question

You the first thing i wanna see in the mornin'
Your the last voice i wanna hear before i sleep
and i know i can be selfish and annoyin'
Cause i don't want you to love anyone else but me🥺
I know i'm not the one you wanted
too many signs to try to say otherwise
Why can't you just be honest?
told too many lies now it eats you alive and i know it

Answer 1

Anyone have any suggestions or things i should add or take away from it?

Answer 2

this is good

Answer 3

Yeah this is good I like it a lot.

Answer 4

I'm going to try to make a quick one !!

Answer 5

Let's see how it comes out...

Answer 6

I suck at this

Answer 7

Hold up

Answer 8

it's about butterflies

Answer 9

it's the first poem i've ever written so it's bad but wtv

Answer 10

Just a group of friends
Floating through the air

Gliding in the wind
Soaring without a care

As our wings spread
We leave together

The water falls on our head
So we flapped and flapped our feathers

We left our home
It was’t fun

But we fly straight
Straight to the sun

Answer 11

Like when they migrate

Answer 12

@Lilly2010

Answer 13

oh

Answer 14

Nice