Question

Poem I made for a poetry contest do you think I have a chance of wining or no

The place they stay is in my head
They feed on my brain
They drive me insane
The way they speak

It is more than just a dumb phrase
It is more than people may see
It is more that meets the eye
It gets more painful each day

Sometimes it is hard to get out of bed
Sometimes it is hard to eat
Sometimes I let it all get to me
Sometimes my mind consumes me

Pain is something that eats me up inside
Pain is something that helps me sleep at night
Pain is something that slowly calms me down
Pain is something I can't live without

Deep down I am slowly dying
Deep down I am slowly struggling
Deep down this pain is all to much
Deep down I just want to feel her touch

If only it did not hurt so much

Answer 1

L

Answer 2

It's very good, I like it

Answer 3

i like it 100/10

Answer 4

your welcome <3

Answer 5

oh ok

Answer 6

love it<3