It's another song I had in mind (please no negative comments) I walk through the rain at night as the wind blows hard and the rain pours down on me..just thinking about all the things I could of done for her now I feel guilty cause I couldn't save her. All she asked was to go out and eat but she fainted (fainted) I called the ambulance and they took her to a nearby hospital...I saw her body laying on the bed worrying for my sweet girl, I thought they could bring her back but it was to late..As I'm crying through the rain and the loud thunder..I still feel guilty of my actions.
It's cool ig, it feels more like a story rather than a song, maybe you could do better with story writing? idk tho.
Good suggestion I'm trying my hardest to become a singer/beatboxer
:)
This does sound more like it could be a story but it's good.
It's good you should write for a director movie.
Thank you all very much
I think this would work better as a poem personally. you definitely could shape it into a song tho :)
nice
This is good
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