ctomk3743:
It's another song I had in mind (please no negative comments) I walk through the rain at night as the wind blows hard and the rain pours down on me..just thinking about all the things I could of done for her now I feel guilty cause I couldn't save her. All she asked was to go out and eat but she fainted (fainted) I called the ambulance and they took her to a nearby hospital...I saw her body laying on the bed worrying for my sweet girl, I thought they could bring her back but it was to late..As I'm crying through the rain and the loud thunder..I still feel guilty of my actions.
PureSoulless:
It's cool ig, it feels more like a story rather than a song, maybe you could do better with story writing? idk tho.
ctomk3743:
Good suggestion I'm trying my hardest to become a singer/beatboxer
PureSoulless:
ctomk3743:
PureSoulless:
:)
XShawtyX:
This does sound more like it could be a story but it's good.
Jasonisyours:
It's good you should write for a director movie.
ctomk3743:
Thank you all very much
somnium:
I think this would work better as a poem personally. you definitely could shape it into a song tho :)
euphoriiic:
nice
YoursTruly1234:
This is good
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