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Poem<33 I'm trying to start expressing myself in new ways to take care of myself. Lmk what you think! It isn't the best. It isn't about all guys dww js about one who hurt me. I also slightly rushed :^

I cried one day
Don't know why
I wanna say
It's cause of a guy

We don't know
The worth we got
We place it on 
A man we lost

He loved me
He hugged me
He held me when I cried
He left me when I died.

They just want happy
They don't see the sad
They leave us if we cry.
I miss him then.

Bones · Answer

It's really good, good job✨

Beanie · Answer

@bones wrote:

It's really good, good job✨

Thank you! first one I've made in a couple months lul-

YoursTruly1234 · Answer

👏👏👏

Bones · Answer

@beanie wrote:

@bones wrote:

It's really good, good job✨

Thank you! first one I've made in a couple months lul-

You're welcome✨

Beanie · Answer

@yourstruly1234 wrote:

👏👏👏

uwu

Breathless · Answer

hm pretty good

Beanie · Answer

@breathless wrote:

hm pretty good

thanks!

Breathless · Answer

Though add more depth into it-

Breathless · Answer

nvm -v-

Alexis1415 · Answer

It's great, although I have to agree with breathless, I feel like it could have a bit more depth, at the moment for just starting again it seems fairly simple, that's not bad. Just suggesting.

Beanie · Answer

@alexis1415 wrote:

It's great, although I have to agree with breathless, I feel like it could have a bit more depth, at the moment for just starting again it seems fairly simple, that's not bad. Just suggesting.

okay thank you <33