So I been working on a story for a roleplay I ain't sure how it is lmk

Question

Bones · Answer

Story the setting is in a highschool , there will be a school shooter 
When time goes wrong 
will love save the school or will the school fall

The school shooter walks into the school and starts leading people to a class room as he does two people sitting to each other
One who has a knife in his shirt and the other clinging onto the other
The shooter is about to start executing hostages ( make the story from here on)

Bones · Answer

@xshawtyx

XShawtyX · Answer

Like I continue w the story?

Bones · Answer

@xshawtyx wrote:

Like I continue w the story?

I made it this way so people can make the story happen they way they want, it's up to them how the story goes lol

XShawtyX · Answer

bet give me a sec :>

Bones · Answer

@bones wrote:

@xshawtyx wrote:

Like I continue w the story?

I made it this way so people can make the story happen they way they want, it's up to them how the story goes lol

The**

XShawtyX · Answer

As the school shooter, a young man named Tyler, forces students and teachers into a classroom, tension hangs heavy in the air. The room is silent except for the sound of ragged breathing and the occasional sob. Tyler's eyes are cold, his hands steady as he moves to the front of the room, his weapon raised. He orders everyone to sit on the floor, and they obey, fear and confusion etched on their faces.
(this good?)

Bones · Answer

@xshawtyx wrote:

As the school shooter, a young man named Tyler, forces students and teachers into a classroom, tension hangs heavy in the air. The room is silent except for the sound of ragged breathing and the occasional sob. Tyler's eyes are cold, his hands steady as he moves to the front of the room, his weapon raised. He orders everyone to sit on the floor, and they obey, fear and confusion etched on their faces. (this good?)

Yes it is also everyone else can make it the way they want too

Bones · Answer

I want to see how people will make it into their own

Bones · Answer

That's why I made this post

XShawtyX · Answer

Oo oki

somnium · Answer

i like it, its kinda situational, but if it were done on c.ai, honestly it'd be difficult to ge thte ai to respond accordingly lol
great development tho :)

Bones · Answer

@somnium wrote:

i like it, its kinda situational, but if it were done on c.ai, honestly it'd be difficult to ge thte ai to respond accordingly lol great development tho :)

It is done I just wanted to see what everyone else could do with it

somnium · Answer

@bones wrote:

@somnium wrote:

i like it, its kinda situational, but if it were done on c.ai, honestly it'd be difficult to ge thte ai to respond accordingly lol great development tho :)

It is done I just wanted to see what everyone else could do with it

yeah i understand that im just giving input lol

Bones · Answer

@somnium wrote:

@bones wrote:

@somnium wrote:

i like it, its kinda situational, but if it were done on c.ai, honestly it'd be difficult to ge thte ai to respond accordingly lol great development tho :)

It is done I just wanted to see what everyone else could do with it

yeah i understand that im just giving input lol

K