Is this a good letter to my teacher who lost her Husband in the Appellatee High School Shooting
Life has ups and downs
Leading in a loop and a never-ending truth
As a person who loves god
Enough to jump off a cliff with just one word
God has a plan and I see that path
Although it was an unexpected death
I say it’s true, he still loves you
With a famous line from the titanic
Your heart will go on and on oh so on

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Is this a good letter to my teacher who lost her Husband in the Appellatee High School Shooting
Life has ups and downs 
Leading in a loop and a never-ending truth
As a person who loves god 
Enough to jump off a cliff with just one word 
God has a plan and I see that path
Although it was an unexpected death 
I say it’s true, he still loves you
With a famous line from the titanic 
Your heart will go on and on oh so on

Breathless · Answer

Good! I like how u did the poem!

foxey3 · Answer

Thx

somnium · Answer

i like it a lot, i think its suiting :)

Bones · Answer

It is really good, keep it up