Is this a good or bad poem ?

Poem for him

Question

Is this a good or bad poem ?

Poem for him <3

I love everything about him
His hair
His smile
His eyes

I love his heart 
I love his fears
I love his voice
I love his choices

His glasses 
His perfect idea on life
His nose
His ears

I even love his tears
Even though I hate it when he cries 
But he looks so cute
I can’t help but love him

I will always choose him no matter what, love you dummy <3

9/22/24 10:32pm

LostSonReturns · Answer

i would say it is a very good poem to me and i love it! it is heartfelt and personal so great job :)

gingy57016 · Answer

@lostsonreturns wrote:

i would say it is a very good poem to me and i love it! it is heartfelt and personal so great job :)

Thank you so much my bf liked it so I thought I would share it !

LostSonReturns · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@lostsonreturns wrote:

i would say it is a very good poem to me and i love it! it is heartfelt and personal so great job :)

Thank you so much my bf liked it so I thought I would share it !

that is awesome! so sweet he liked it

gingy57016 · Answer

@lostsonreturns wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@lostsonreturns wrote:

i would say it is a very good poem to me and i love it! it is heartfelt and personal so great job :)

Thank you so much my bf liked it so I thought I would share it !

that is awesome! so sweet he liked it

Tysm for your feedback <333

LostSonReturns · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@lostsonreturns wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@lostsonreturns wrote:

i would say it is a very good poem to me and i love it! it is heartfelt and personal so great job :)

Thank you so much my bf liked it so I thought I would share it !

that is awesome! so sweet he liked it

Tysm for your feedback <333

Absolutely! i'm really happy for you! it is great to share those feelings it shows how much you care! ❤️

gingy57016 · Answer

@lostsonreturns wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

I hope you have an amazing week

@lostsonreturns wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@lostsonreturns wrote:

i would say it is a very good poem to me and i love it! it is heartfelt and personal so great job :)

Thank you so much my bf liked it so I thought I would share it !

that is awesome! so sweet he liked it

Tysm for your feedback <333

Absolutely! i'm really happy for you! it is great to share those feelings it shows how much you care! ❤️

gingy57016 · Answer

I hope you have an amazing week lol

LostSonReturns · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

I hope you have an amazing week lol

Thanks you too lol :)

slavemanblack · Answer

this is good i liked this

Breathless · Answer

Good job

Breathless · Answer

Even if it doesn't rhyme it does express a lot of emotions B)

AcornTheNut · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@lostsonreturns wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

I hope you have an amazing week

@lostsonreturns wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@lostsonreturns wrote:

i would say it is a very good poem to me and i love it! it is heartfelt and personal so great job :)

Thank you so much my bf liked it so I thought I would share it !

that is awesome! so sweet he liked it

Tysm for your feedback <333

Absolutely! i'm really happy for you! it is great to share those feelings it shows how much you care! ❤️

this is the biggest quote chain I've ever seen in my life on qc

axie · Answer

ive seen them get so long that they take up like whole screen and all the letters are pushed into a row

I like the poem alot, it has a flare of obsession to it

quackers4life · Answer

It's neat and tidy not obnoxious at all not every single word rhymes with each other so I'm my pov it's perfect

marienne · Answer

i would say it is a very good poemto me and i love it! it is heartfelt.and good i love it🥶

CherryLover · Answer

this is a very good poem because it shows how much you love him and he will know that he means so much to you, he will definitly remember this poem forever.

gingy57016 · Answer

@slavemanblack wrote:

this is good i liked this

Tysm !!!

gingy57016 · Answer

@breathless wrote:

Even if it doesn't rhyme it does express a lot of emotions B)

I tried sorry it does not rhyme I will do better next time tysm for your input !

gingy57016 · Answer

@axie wrote:

ive seen them get so long that they take up like whole screen and all the letters are pushed into a row I like the poem alot, it has a flare of obsession to it

Thank's that means a lot to me !

gingy57016 · Answer

@quackers4life wrote:

It's neat and tidy not obnoxious at all not every single word rhymes with each other so I'm my pov it's perfect

Thank you

gingy57016 · Answer

@marienne wrote:

i would say it is a very good poemto me and i love it! it is heartfelt.and good i love it🥶

<33

gingy57016 · Answer

@cherrylover wrote:

this is a very good poem because it shows how much you love him and he will know that he means so much to you, he will definitly remember this poem forever.

I hope he will haha

forgetmylife · Answer

Its a good poem I felt all the emotion within it

gingy57016 · Answer

@forgetmylife wrote:

Its a good poem I felt all the emotion within it

I really tried thank you !

NoLevel · Answer

I will say its a sweet poem but you need to go deeper on a deeper level. it really depends how old you are but all your giving him is compliments and what you love about him but what about his heart, if you really wanna touch his heart what did he do for you that makes you feel this way. what about him is different from other boys. He's gonna wanna feel special because you could say this about a lot of different boys but if you want it to be special you have to make it unique to him and him only. Its your choice tho

gingy57016 · Answer

@nolevel wrote:

I will say its a sweet poem but you need to go deeper on a deeper level. it really depends how old you are but all your giving him is compliments and what you love about him but what about his heart, if you really wanna touch his heart what did he do for you that makes you feel this way. what about him is different from other boys. He's gonna wanna feel special because you could say this about a lot of different boys but if you want it to be special you have to make it unique to him and him only. Its your choice tho

But he loved it though he said it was real good and he enjoyed reading it he said it even made him smile

NoLevel · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@nolevel wrote:

I will say its a sweet poem but you need to go deeper on a deeper level. it really depends how old you are but all your giving him is compliments and what you love about him but what about his heart, if you really wanna touch his heart what did he do for you that makes you feel this way. what about him is different from other boys. He's gonna wanna feel special because you could say this about a lot of different boys but if you want it to be special you have to make it unique to him and him only. Its your choice tho

But he loved it though he said it was real good and he enjoyed reading it he said it even made him smile

Honestly it depends how old you are. But I'm glad he loved it

gingy57016 · Answer

@nolevel wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@nolevel wrote:

I will say its a sweet poem but you need to go deeper on a deeper level. it really depends how old you are but all your giving him is compliments and what you love about him but what about his heart, if you really wanna touch his heart what did he do for you that makes you feel this way. what about him is different from other boys. He's gonna wanna feel special because you could say this about a lot of different boys but if you want it to be special you have to make it unique to him and him only. Its your choice tho

But he loved it though he said it was real good and he enjoyed reading it he said it even made him smile

Honestly it depends how old you are. But I'm glad he loved it

I do not wanna give my age out ^^

NoLevel · Answer

@gingy57016 wrote:

@nolevel wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@nolevel wrote:

I will say its a sweet poem but you need to go deeper on a deeper level. it really depends how old you are but all your giving him is compliments and what you love about him but what about his heart, if you really wanna touch his heart what did he do for you that makes you feel this way. what about him is different from other boys. He's gonna wanna feel special because you could say this about a lot of different boys but if you want it to be special you have to make it unique to him and him only. Its your choice tho

But he loved it though he said it was real good and he enjoyed reading it he said it even made him smile

Honestly it depends how old you are. But I'm glad he loved it

I do not wanna give my age out ^^

nah I ain't sayin you got to. I'm not even thinking that's a good idea but what I am saying is if you want it to really hit him, you gotta use paranoia and make it special to him because like I said you could say that about a lot of different guys and make them smile so what's special about him that makes you feel that way. I'm not saying you have to so don't think you do

gingy57016 · Answer

@nolevel wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@nolevel wrote:

@gingy57016 wrote:

@nolevel wrote:

I will say its a sweet poem but you need to go deeper on a deeper level. it really depends how old you are but all your giving him is compliments and what you love about him but what about his heart, if you really wanna touch his heart what did he do for you that makes you feel this way. what about him is different from other boys. He's gonna wanna feel special because you could say this about a lot of different boys but if you want it to be special you have to make it unique to him and him only. Its your choice tho

But he loved it though he said it was real good and he enjoyed reading it he said it even made him smile

Honestly it depends how old you are. But I'm glad he loved it

I do not wanna give my age out ^^

nah I ain't sayin you got to. I'm not even thinking that's a good idea but what I am saying is if you want it to really hit him, you gotta use paranoia and make it special to him because like I said you could say that about a lot of different guys and make them smile so what's special about him that makes you feel that way. I'm not saying you have to so don't think you do

I am going to make him a new one for his birthday that is coming up ^^

slavemanblack · Answer

this is a good poem

buttercat · Answer

hmmm, no cats, he won't like it

gingy57016 · Answer

@buttercat wrote:

hmmm, no cats, he won't like it

May I ask why ?