Beanie:
"Perfect Love" Love is when he tightens his grip on your hands when you cross a street Love is when your hurting and he holds you in his lap Love is when he matches your energy, even when it's only because your glad you made a 100 on a minor grade you thought you was finna fail Love is when he kisses all your worries away Love is when even though you believe your ugly he looks at you like your a queen. Love is when he never leaves.
Alanaaaaaaa:
Awwe, your poem has some feelings in it. It's pretty good. Good job!
Aliciaa:
LOVE IT
Beanie:
Thank you! It was kinda a draft/rushed yk?
AngelOfLight:
I love this poem! š It captures those little moments of love perfectly, like holding hands and feeling beautiful. The line about seeing you as a queen is so sweet! Iād give it a 9/10! Great job! š
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