Poem i js made Warning *Triggering*

In the shadows where silence carves its own refrain,
Thoughts whisper like shadows, a haunting, gentle pain.
A flicker of hope, drowned in midnight’s embrace,
Will anyone notice if I vanish without trace?

I skate on the edges where darkness swells and bends,
Haunted by questions of love, and if love ever ends.
Would they search for my laughter, or mourn what’s been lost?
Or would I drift quietly, just another soul tossed?
I wonder how deep I'll go until I disappear i wonder if they will care or just see me as somebody on the dark web

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Poem i js made Warning *Triggering*

In the shadows where silence carves its own refrain,
Thoughts whisper like shadows, a haunting, gentle pain.
A flicker of hope, drowned in midnight’s embrace,
Will anyone notice if I vanish without trace?

I skate on the edges where darkness swells and bends,
Haunted by questions of love, and if love ever ends.
Would they search for my laughter, or mourn what’s been lost?
Or would I drift quietly, just another soul tossed?                                              
I wonder how deep I'll go until I disappear i wonder if they will care or just see me as somebody on the dark web

idontexistrn1 · Answer

deeeeeep

AcornTheNut · Answer

Poems go in the "Writing" subject

idontexistrn1 · Answer

@acornthenut wrote:

Poems go in the "Writing" subject

give her a break

AcornTheNut · Answer

@idontexistrn1 wrote:

@acornthenut wrote:

Poems go in the "Writing" subject

give her a break

I'm not causing any kind of stress to this person, also there is a rule of not having side conversations on posts, so if you reply to this, don't expect an answer.

idontexistrn1 · Answer

i don't

0mega · Answer

Every person I’ve seen on the dark web is either a pred, druggie, or a psychopath

laylapoisonous · Answer

thx guys for the feedback ig

notmeta · Answer

@0mega wrote:

Every person I’ve seen on the dark web is either a pred, druggie, or a psychopath

or someone whos just curious

dgreer4 · Answer

@laylapoisonous Really feeling this.. It's a beautiful poem

sllo · Answer

Brick by brick

idontexistrn1 · Answer

@sllo wrote:

Brick by brick

?

Exile · Answer

Very well written! Great Job!! 🤍

AguyWhoIsBlack · Answer

I think it is good, I usually don't read poem's but this one caught my eye

ihy · Answer

Very well written! Great Job!! <3

cherryblossom999 · Answer

beautiful