Question

Made a new song

When I see you
Baby I go wild
And I go crazy
when I see you smile
Baby you're my wild side ( x2)

I wake up early in the morning
With a vision of you
You've got my heart in you're hands
I don't know what to do

Girl your grin is infectious
Every time you smile
It spreads around
Even in the midst of night

When I see you
Baby I go wild
And I go crazy
When I see you smile
Baby you're my wild side (x2)

When I'm with you
I wanna bowl at the moon
I could do it all night
Girl do it with you

When I see you
Baby I go wild
And I go crazy
when I see you smile
And every time you look my way
I'm so happy that I'm with you
And even tho I don't say
Baby you feel the same way
I fell in love with you inna day
And all I have to say is
Baby you're my wild side (x4)

When I see you
Baby I go wild
And I go crazy
When I see you smile
Baby you're my wild side (x2)

Answer 1

nice lyrics

Answer 2

nice rhyme scheme, my only recommendation is try to even out the syllables a bit. that may be on purpose though, so dont take it as criticism. very nice lyrics! ^^

Answer 3

good lyrics, do u have a tempo yet?

Answer 4

Very well written! Great Job!! 🤍

Answer 5

I like the lyrics, do you have a beat yet?

Answer 6

lwk ate