Question

You didn't end up being a fighter
A tragedy
You've always been a quitter
Your desire
Lacked gravity
You cracked under pressure
One bite, you're taking shelter
Time it always tells, truth told itself
And what I found is
I'm better off, better off
Better off, better off
With you gone
Didn't measure up, measure up
Measure up, measure up
With your talk
Now words out on the street
You couldn't keep up with me
Was slow down or watch you leave
So now you're gone

Answer 1

"I'm better off, with you gone. You couldn't keep up with me, so now you're gone."

I completely felt that. I felt the pain in this poem and I thank you for posting this Andrew. I'm always here for you as you have been for me. Remember that. 🤍

Answer 2

amazing

Answer 3

thats deep

Answer 4

this is a good poem and i like it so far

Answer 5

the rhymes in this are varied from most other rhymes that people use, 'gravity' and 'tragedy' are more obscure words that wouldnt be used as commonly. very good combinations in this, keep it up! ^^

Answer 6

wow this is soooooo good .

Answer 7

oh

Answer 8

I have competition?