Question

A poem I wrote about my Mom:
n shadows deep where silence stings,
Frustration brews on heavy wings.
Words left unsaid, a bitter tide,
In this heart where love and hurt collide.

You wore your strength like armor bright,
Yet I felt small, lost in your light.
Your laughter echoed, sharp and clear,
But in that sound, I hid my fear.

The weight of dreams you cast my way,
A burdened gift I learned to weigh.
Why can’t you see the scars I bear?
The weight of your hope, a cross I wear.

In moments dark, my voice would rise,
A tempest born from silent cries.
“I’m more than what you dreamed for me,”
Yet still I yearn for you to see.

But anger’s flame can burn so hot,
It masks the love that can’t be caught.
So here I stand, both fierce and frail,
A daughter lost, a ship set sail.

Yet in the storm, a truth remains:
Love and anger both leave stains.
So I’ll learn to bridge this chasm wide,
To find the peace where hearts collide.

Answer 1

i lost my mom two days ago

Answer 2

I'm sorry for your loss, and its a beautiful poem

Answer 3

thanks

Answer 4

nice poem

Answer 5

nice poem, keep up the work

Answer 6

this is very nice bro love it

Answer 7

we have to appreciate what we have, because we could lose it at any time, with no warning