Question

Pretty by lilly : In the mirror’s quiet gaze, I seek
A glimpse of light, a spark, a peak,
A whisper of beauty, soft and sweet,
To wear like a song, light on my feet.

Petals of blush on cheeks aglow,
Like dawn breaking softly, a gentle show,
Lace and silk drape my hopes anew,
In the tapestry of dreams, I want to be true.

Let the sun kiss my skin, a warm embrace,
As I twirl through the day, lost in grace,
With laughter like music, a melody clear,
I long to feel pretty, to shed every fear.

A crown of wildflowers, a dance in the breeze,
To find in each moment a heart that believes,
That beauty is more than a face or a dress—
It’s the light that we carry, our truest finesse.

So here’s to the journey, each step, every sway,
To the colors of life that brighten the gray,
For in seeking the pretty, I discover my part—
That the truest of beauty begins in the heart.

Answer 1

Any feedback or improvement?

Answer 2

is gooooddddd

Answer 3

Cute

Answer 4

loove gj lilly

Answer 5

This is really beautiful baby❤️ i don't think it needs any improvement it's perfect❤️ u should really make a book of all your poems❤️
I love u sooooo muchhhhhh<3

Answer 6

amazingggg

Answer 7

Mamas this is beautiful, I love when you write because it shows us how you feel love. I wish you'd write more though, I love reading everyones stuff. Good job my love

Answer 8

W