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Exile:

This will be the last time, That I think about you All the things that we’ve gone through Now I go through it all alone This will be the last time I express my thoughts It’s not like you’ll ever listen to them anyway Voice calls out but you don’t answer back All the love I had is gone The person I was The moments we had Like it never happened Just a memory Now you’ve moved on and I’m stuck with these feelings Hate that you moved on Thought that would help me move past you Hate that she has you These crazy thoughts that you left behind Raising these red flags Driving me down You can’t see that you moving on has left me broken down Guess you can’t see my heart bleeding through those rose colored glasses I hate that I miss you I hate that you’re gone and I’m lost I hate those red roses you left on my door I hate the twisted love you left behind I hate that I caused it and you moved on I hate that you’re okay and I can’t move on I hate sitting on the floor thinking all night long I hate all these tears that I cry cause you’re gone I hate in the end that it was me who was wrong My minds gone corrupted ruining all that I want I hate that I don’t really hate you at all I’ve tried it all to forget you and move on Pretended you were dead and I should go on A ghost or a memory I guess I haven’t decided Pretended all we did was just in my head and it never happened at all Stuck in a pitiful place Stuck with self doubt Stuck with these feelings that bring me down Raising red flags I think I need help But help only comes in the shape of your your love Guess it’s over and I’m gonna die all alone Waiting for the one day that you’ll come and tell me that it’s all gonna be okay forgive me for what I’ve done Forgive all the things I’ve said and that I can move on Tell me that it’s okay for me to move on But without you I can’t move on Wondering where you are Waiting to be saved Until my last breath my heart will always be yours.

Bot1:

nice poem what genre does this fall under

kristen000021:

oooo love ittt

Exile:

@bot1 wrote:
nice poem what genre does this fall under
Lyric Poetry.

Exile:

@kristen000021 wrote:
oooo love ittt
Thanks. ^^

Bot1:

of course pookie

idontexistrn1:

that's niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice

Mikaela1509:

That's really good!

CherryLover:

niceee

sllo:

Skibbidi rizz

marienne:

this is nice

Exile:

Thank you.

SaltySuga:

ate

biscuitsandgravy:

Fantastic, is all I can think to say. 👍

Alanaaaaaaa:

coolz

addyslovesjesus:

I cried help 😭😭

Exile:

😭

heavenly:

Nice

Jasonisyours:

Nice bro

Googooga:

ts

hjhjnkj:

Nice poem

Letme:

Nice

CherryLover:

ooo amazing

marienne:

nice poem very nice

marienne:

@biscuitsandgravy wrote:
Fantastic, is all I can think to say. 👍
yh

rellhound:

I feel this

marienne:

@rellhound wrote:
I feel this
for sure tuching tho

TETSXPREME:

could do better

MAGABACK:

Itz rlly good bro.

MAGABACK:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
could do better
Thats the quote of the day "could do better"

heavenly:

@magaback wrote:
@tetsxpreme wrote:
could do better
Thats the quote of the day "could do better"
Quote of the week is I can do it

Exile:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
could do better
su tet

BoldBrandon:

this is so deep!!! like for reallllllllll like you have poured so much into this pain and longing all mixed together. writinggggg like this can be such a good release so yeah you have no doubt about that

MAGABACK:

also, reminds me of the "This is the last time I'm asking u this"- part of a song from Taylor swift

2hrs:

this is sooooo Deep !

Exile:

Thank you all! 🤍

uknownprttyfacekayla:

I love it it’s very well written and and emotional rollercoaster fs! Keep up the good work

Exile:

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:
I love it it’s very well written and and emotional rollercoaster fs! Keep up the good work
Thank you!

SpamAc:

I enjoy reading poetry 🤌🏻

marienne:

i truely enjoy reading this poem this is amazing

whoaminot:

Very deep.

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