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Lilly2010:

Poem about Broken promises written by Lilly: In the quiet of night, where shadows creep, Lie whispers of dreams that no longer keep, Like paper boats tossed on a restless sea, Each promise once bright, now a memory. Words hung in the air, sweet like the spring, Now echo with silence, a forgotten thing, The laughter we shared, now a distant sound, In the ruins of trust, lost hopes abound. The warmth of your touch, once a tender embrace, Now lingers like ghosts in this empty space, Promises made in the light of our days, Now flicker like candles, their light lost in haze. Each vow that was spoken, a thread in the weave, Frayed by the heartache, too fragile to believe, We built a fine castle on dreams made of sand, Only to watch it slip through our hands. But in the shards left, a lesson remains, That love, though it falters, can still bear its pains, For even in sorrow, we learn to stand tall, And rise from the ashes, embracing it all. So here in the darkness, I gather my dreams, Stitching the fragments with hope’s gentle seams, For though promises break, they also can mend, In the journey of love, it’s not just the end.

kristen000021:

gurlll... pure talent <3

Lilly2010:

@kristen000021 wrote:
gurlll... pure talent <3
tyty

kristen000021:

@lilly2010 wrote:
@kristen000021 wrote:
gurlll... pure talent <3
tyty
ofc.. Love having a talent BSF <3

Lilly2010:

@kristen000021 wrote:
@lilly2010 wrote:
@kristen000021 wrote:
gurlll... pure talent <3
tyty
ofc.. Love having a talent BSF <3
YUR

CherryLover:

love it :D

Lilly2010:

@cherrylover wrote:
love it :D
ty

SunFlower01:

amazing

Lilly2010:

@sunflower01 wrote:
amazing
ty

SunFlower01:

@lilly2010 wrote:
@sunflower01 wrote:
amazing
ty
ofc

euphoriiic:

lovee gj

BoldBrandon:

amazing i love it my bro!!!!

Lilly2010:

thanks ya'll

BoldBrandon:

@lilly2010 wrote:
thanks ya'll
yw my mommas i may not be smart enough to know everything. but i am not dumb enough to try anything lol

Lilly2010:

@boldbrandon wrote:
@lilly2010 wrote:
thanks ya'll
yw my mommas i may not be smart enough to know everything. but i am not dumb enough to try anything lol
Mommas? and yes very true. No one is dumb.

BoldBrandon:

@lilly2010 wrote:
@boldbrandon wrote:
@lilly2010 wrote:
thanks ya'll
yw my mommas i may not be smart enough to know everything. but i am not dumb enough to try anything lol
Mommas? and yes very true. No one is dumb.
Totally dude!!!

Lilly2010:

@boldbrandon wrote:
@lilly2010 wrote:
@boldbrandon wrote:
@lilly2010 wrote:
thanks ya'll
yw my mommas i may not be smart enough to know everything. but i am not dumb enough to try anything lol
Mommas? and yes very true. No one is dumb.
Totally dude!!!
Erm....okay then...

2hrs:

omg this is soooo good totally rad !

Lilly2010:

@2hrs wrote:
omg this is soooo good totally rad !
tyty

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