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Alanaaaaaaa:

I stand on this old road, where laughter once spilled, like sun on the pavement, where secrets whispered, and dreams soared high, like kites on a warm spring day. But time twisted and turned, and in that tangle, I lost sight of us lost sight of you. I let my own jealousy, like a dark cloud, block out the sun. Your love was pure, shining like the stars, while I hid in shadows, clouded by my own fears. I spoke words I shouldn’t, thoughtless, careless, and built a wall between you, and that love you found. Remember those late nights, when we’d talk about everything, dream about the future, and the bond we shared, as calm as the ocean, as firm as the ground beneath us? I chose chaos over calm, and what I said seeped through, like water through cracks in a dam, breaking apart something beautiful, and for that, I’m really sorry. It aches to think, that I played a part, in your heart breaking, in that quiet goodbye, a friendship that shattered, into pieces we both now carry. I wish more than anything, to reach across the divide, to tell you how I miss, the laughter, the trust, the bond we swore would never bend. It wasn’t just your joy that fell, but something inside me, too, a part that thrived in your light, a part that feels small, lost without you beside me. Can we find a way back to a place where trust blooms again? To a spot on this road, where we can laugh, and stitch together what broke, through honesty and grace? I’m standing here, tentative, with an open heart, hoping you’ll hear my words, know the weight of my regret, and somewhere, somehow, allow the sunshine back in. Forgive me, dear friend, for my selfishness, for my hurt. Let’s reclaim a piece of our past, maybe not the same, but a new path forward, where love, not loss, leads the way home.

Alanaaaaaaa:

mhm

JaceBrooks223:

i like the poem

Alanaaaaaaa:

@jacebrooks223 wrote:
i like the poem
Thank You!

JaceBrooks223:

yeh np i respect good poetry

Alanaaaaaaa:

@jacebrooks223 wrote:
yeh np i respect good poetry
Well thank you, I like writing

CherryLover:

I like this poem

marienne:

@cherrylover wrote:
I like this poem
i love it

rellhound:

I feel this

MAGABACK:

hey 'das good!

TETSXPREME:

could do better

MAGABACK:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
could do better
ok I dare u 2

TETSXPREME:

@magaback wrote:
@tetsxpreme wrote:
could do better
ok I dare u 2
light work

MAGABACK:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
@magaback wrote:
@tetsxpreme wrote:
could do better
ok I dare u 2
light work
mhm mkay

forgetmylife:

Its a w poem Lana I can see the emotion within this it has a deep meaning hidden within it its a wonderful poem keep it up 💞

2hrs:

this is oh so good !

BoldBrandon:

i feel this already :(

cora1:

it's beautiful

idontexistrn1:

@forgetmylife wrote:
Its a w poem Lana I can see the emotion within this it has a deep meaning hidden within it its a wonderful poem keep it up 💞
agreed

sllo:

Oh so skibbidi

Alanaaaaaaa:

@forgetmylife wrote:
Its a w poem Lana I can see the emotion within this it has a deep meaning hidden within it its a wonderful poem keep it up 💞
thank you!!!

pennalopee:

Good job

Alanaaaaaaa:

@pennalopee wrote:
Good job
Thank you!

Midnight97:

Omg girly this poem is fire 🔥 🔥🔥 keep it up pooks

Alanaaaaaaa:

@midnight97 wrote:
Omg girly this poem is fire 🔥 🔥🔥 keep it up pooks
thank you girly pop

Midnight97:

@alanaaaaaaa wrote:
@midnight97 wrote:
Omg girly this poem is fire 🔥 🔥🔥 keep it up pooks
thank you girly pop
Np

SunFlower01:

good job

uknownprttyfacekayla:

Beautiful lana

Alanaaaaaaa:

@uknownprttyfacekayla wrote:
Beautiful lana
THANK YOUUU

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