Question

"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

The stars go waltzing out in blue and red,
And arbitrary blackness gallops in:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.

Answer 1

niceee

Answer 2

this is beautiful i love it

Answer 3

thx

Answer 4

i love the repetition between the first and last line, it gives a flowy sense to it :)

Answer 5

thx

Answer 6

Wonderful!

Answer 7

nice ig

Answer 8

i love this poem. i like how it captures the struggles between escaping reality and finding beauty again. :)

Answer 9

A deep meaning towards this, amazing job!!

Answer 10

Clean

Answer 11

gjj

Answer 12

This is fire I love it 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾