"The Sky"

It's blue,
it's so cloudy,
when it rains,
she lays below,
opening the door to see her smile,
but life ended her,
her beautiful smile,
he begged for her to come on home,
the only home she had was the one in the sky.

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"The Sky"

It's blue,
it's so cloudy,
when it rains,
she lays below,
opening the door to see her smile,
but life ended her,
her beautiful smile,
he begged for her to come on home,
the only home she had was the one in the sky.

Midnight97 · Answer

Wow this is just wow it is beautiful

TeenyTinyPerson · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

Wow this is just wow it is beautiful

I guess so

Googooga · Answer

I wouldn't say I agree but ight

Googooga · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

Wow this is just wow it is beautiful

Glaze

Nininiko · Answer

This is an amazing poem!! Keep up the great work!

Googooga · Answer

They lying to you 🤓

Midnight97 · Answer

@googooga wrote:

They lying to you 🤓

I wouldn't lie to my pooks

Googooga · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

They lying to you 🤓

I wouldn't lie to my pooks

Well you clearly are lying as the words don't connect or flow and the poem lacks coherence and meaning

Midnight97 · Answer

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

They lying to you 🤓

I wouldn't lie to my pooks

Well you clearly are lying as the words don't connect or flow and the poem lacks coherence and meaning

It doesn't matter is it flows or not as long as it's good that's all that matters

Nininiko · Answer

Exactly.

Googooga · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

They lying to you 🤓

I wouldn't lie to my pooks

Well you clearly are lying as the words don't connect or flow and the poem lacks coherence and meaning

It doesn't matter is it flows or not as long as it's good that's all that matters

I believe that a good poem should have both meaning and flow. It's all about how the message resonates with the reader. If it doesn't connect, it's hard for me to see the value in it

Midnight97 · Answer

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

They lying to you 🤓

I wouldn't lie to my pooks

Well you clearly are lying as the words don't connect or flow and the poem lacks coherence and meaning

It doesn't matter is it flows or not as long as it's good that's all that matters

I believe that a good poem should have both meaning and flow. It's all about how the message resonates with the reader. If it doesn't connect, it's hard for me to see the value in it

You believe what you want 🤷🏻 people has their own opinions

Googooga · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

They lying to you 🤓

I wouldn't lie to my pooks

Well you clearly are lying as the words don't connect or flow and the poem lacks coherence and meaning

It doesn't matter is it flows or not as long as it's good that's all that matters

I believe that a good poem should have both meaning and flow. It's all about how the message resonates with the reader. If it doesn't connect, it's hard for me to see the value in it

You believe what you want 🤷🏻 people has their own opinions

For sure, everyone’s got their take on it! I just think for a poem to really hit, it’s gotta vibe and mean something. If it doesn’t connect, it’s kinda like a beat without a hook, ya know?

Midnight97 · Answer

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

They lying to you 🤓

I wouldn't lie to my pooks

Well you clearly are lying as the words don't connect or flow and the poem lacks coherence and meaning

It doesn't matter is it flows or not as long as it's good that's all that matters

I believe that a good poem should have both meaning and flow. It's all about how the message resonates with the reader. If it doesn't connect, it's hard for me to see the value in it

You believe what you want 🤷🏻 people has their own opinions

For sure, everyone’s got their take on it! I just think for a poem to really hit, it’s gotta vibe and mean something. If it doesn’t connect, it’s kinda like a beat without a hook, ya know?

Can we take this to DM's I don't want to keep blowing them up

Googooga · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

@midnight97 wrote:

@googooga wrote:

They lying to you 🤓

I wouldn't lie to my pooks

Well you clearly are lying as the words don't connect or flow and the poem lacks coherence and meaning

It doesn't matter is it flows or not as long as it's good that's all that matters

I believe that a good poem should have both meaning and flow. It's all about how the message resonates with the reader. If it doesn't connect, it's hard for me to see the value in it

You believe what you want 🤷🏻 people has their own opinions

For sure, everyone’s got their take on it! I just think for a poem to really hit, it’s gotta vibe and mean something. If it doesn’t connect, it’s kinda like a beat without a hook, ya know?

Can we take this to DM's I don't want to keep blowing them up

Isn't that what it's meant for? Why take it to direct messages? Besides, I've already said everything I wanted to; there's nothing more to discuss.