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NoLevel:

I need a title for this song I saw you in the crowd dancin to the party sounds jumpin high shakin the ground all the music that surrounds got my heart beating so fast saw another guy and walked right past these feelings that you attract girl I wanna make them last and anytime u text my phone girl u got my whole heartstopped running to these hoes and it always left in teardrops do you got the key to open up that whats locked is this meant to be don't know but I wouldn't be shocked I wanna feel yo touch I wanna earn yo trust, these feels came from up above so I wanna show you love change my life and I will change yours if you wanna be here then come w me on my tours feelings we endure but can u rly sure your the girl I adore am I the guy that u will earn goin to church been workin on myself all these things I was doin're bad for my health ran to these girls when my heart was on the shelf is it safe prolly not but can I run to you for help Now we all grown up this is how it be Know you didnt get a chance to say bye joshy And jus like that you were gone in weeks Got reconnected when u turned 18 Tell me is this how a love story goes they go away for a while then come back when ur low And ever since u left i got to singin different songs It started off slow no longer singin in a phone Now is this my heart or my brain Contemplatin And everything we did bae and me would always be playin Looking up at the stars laying down and all im sayin If i asked u out do u think that you would be stayin I wanna feel yo touch I wanna earn yo trust, these feels came from up above so I wanna show you love change my life and I will change yours if you wanna be here then come w me on my tours feelings we endure but can u rly sure your the girl I adore am I the guy that u will earn goin to church been workin on myself all these things I was doin're bad for my health ran to these girls when my heart was on the shelf is it safe prolly not but can I run to you for help

Notforyou:

Ngl that was very good, got me in my feelins a bit.

Notforyou:

Maybe something like "Love takes time" I'm not sure

xxDeppressionxx:

I'm pretty sure this belongs in music.

ihy:

"Heart in the Crowd" would be a great title in my opinion.

Lilly2010:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
I'm pretty sure this belongs in music.
stop telling people where to go to write their stuff, it's a common mistake i'm sure you've made as well.

NoLevel:

@notforyou wrote:
Ngl that was very good, got me in my feelins a bit.
Thank you I Appreciate it

NoLevel:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
I'm pretty sure this belongs in music.
thats a compliment right? If it is, Thank you

NoLevel:

@ihy wrote:
"Heart in the Crowd" would be a great title in my opinion.
I Like it a lot actually

NoLevel:

@lilly2010 wrote:
@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
I'm pretty sure this belongs in music.
stop telling people where to go to write their stuff, it's a common mistake i'm sure you've made as well.
Nah I love criticism. At the end of the day it makes me better

Exile:

Very well written! Great Job!! 🤍

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