love is more thicker than forget
more thinner than recall
more seldom than a wave is wet
more frequent than to fail

it is most mad and moonly
and less it shall unbe
than all the sea which only
is deeper than the sea

love is less always than to win
less never than alive
less bigger than the least begin
less littler than forgive

it is most sane and sunly
and more it cannot die
than all the sky which only
is higher than the sky

thoughts on my poem?

Question

love is more thicker than forget
more thinner than recall
more seldom than a wave is wet
more frequent than to fail

it is most mad and moonly
and less it shall unbe
than all the sea which only
is deeper than the sea

love is less always than to win
less never than alive
less bigger than the least begin
less littler than forgive

it is most sane and sunly
and more it cannot die
than all the sky which only
is higher than the sky

thoughts on my poem?

JaceBrooks223 · Answer

wow yall are so mature

@sweetkai wrote:

poop

@chromakopia wrote:

this is as/s

ihy · Answer

It's good for a start but just a bit of corrections on the grammar, get a good title and you'll be fine.

JaceBrooks223 · Answer

@ihy wrote:

It's good for a start but just a bit of corrections on the grammar, get a good title and you'll be fine.

thank you for your incite

ihy · Answer

@jacebrooks223 wrote:

@ihy wrote:

It's good for a start but just a bit of corrections on the grammar, get a good title and you'll be fine.

thank you for your incite

No problem.

Exile · Answer

Very well written! Great Job!! 🤍