Question

Got another song for y'all but I do have a name for this one but lmk what yall think and if y'all can relate?

I feel so alone
without you in my home
cast away all remains my thoughts in my dome ,
I'm all on my own
but I already know
feeding flames hiding shame can u love me when I don't

all alone,
all alone,
all alone,
all alone,

I feel so aloneee jus me in my bed
all the memoriesss are running through my head
we had so manyyy times we would spend
now that your goneee am I better off dead?

all alone,
all alone,
all alone,
all alone,

are you still dreaming like you used to do
or have the dreams changeddd since im nologer in your room,
do you still feel my loveee like the way you used to
or is all jus painnnn from unhealed wounds

all alone,
all alone,
all alone,
all alone,

Do you see me in your future?
is it clear that I never used her
cuz I wanna make sure i never abused her
but i guess we were kinda seducers

all alone,
all alone,
all alone,
all alone,

Answer 1

Really good, well put.

Answer 2

Good job!

Answer 3

well done good job

Answer 4

Well written! Great job!!

Answer 5

awesome

Answer 6

I would love to sing this

Answer 7

W song

Answer 8

you should name it "alone"

Answer 9

Your song is raw and emotional, expressing deep loneliness and regret. The repetition of all alone emphasizes the pain of loss and self-reflection. It’s powerful and relatable, capturing the struggle after a breakup. Keep writing; it’s a great way to channel those feelings.

Answer 10

I love this so much. good job. I relate sm

Answer 11

Great Job!

Answer 12

would listen

Answer 13

WW