Question

thoughts on my poem and if it needs work?

Looking up at the stars, I know quite well
That, for all they care, I can go to hell,
But on earth indifference is the least
We have to dread from man or beast.

How should we like it were stars to burn
With a passion for us we could not return?
If equal affection cannot be,
Let the more loving one be me.

Admirer as I think I am
Of stars that do not give a damn,
I cannot, now I see them, say
I missed one terribly all day.

Were all stars to disappear or die,
I should learn to look at an empty sky
And feel its total dark sublime,
Though this might take me a little time.

Answer 1

it looks good man

Answer 2

great job!

Answer 3

your poem is great looks good

Answer 4

looks good bro. keep em coming

Answer 5

thank you

Answer 6

fr keep up the good work

Answer 7

thank you

Answer 8

good job

Answer 9

Very well written! Great Job!! 🤍