JaceBrooks223:
thoughts on my poem and if it needs work? Looking up at the stars, I know quite well That, for all they care, I can go to hell, But on earth indifference is the least We have to dread from man or beast. How should we like it were stars to burn With a passion for us we could not return? If equal affection cannot be, Let the more loving one be me. Admirer as I think I am Of stars that do not give a damn, I cannot, now I see them, say I missed one terribly all day. Were all stars to disappear or die, I should learn to look at an empty sky And feel its total dark sublime, Though this might take me a little time.
DemonKinge:
it looks good man
DemonKinge:
great job!
BoldBrandon:
your poem is great looks good
MAGABACK:
looks good bro. keep em coming
JaceBrooks223:
thank you
DemonKinge:
fr keep up the good work
JaceBrooks223:
thank you
idontexistrn1:
good job
Exile:
Very well written! Great Job!! 🤍
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