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Alanaaaaaaa:

Whispers of Surrender In the shadow of unyielding night, Where dreams once danced in silken light, I hear your heart, a tender call, Yet silence hovers, a shrouded wall. “Give it up, baby,” the stars softly plead, As whispers weave through the lurking greed. You don’t put up a fight, it’s clear The weight of hope dissolves in fear. Lost in a maze of echoes deep, Promises made now lie asleep. Let the tide wash away our strife; For some battles are not worth a life. Beneath this sky where shadows blend, In quiet surrender, we find our end.

Thugalicious:

WWWWWWWWWW

BoldBrandon:

wow this is really beautiful my child i love it!!! <33

Alanaaaaaaa:

thank youuu

Breathless:

ga,ejeahkj I turn it into a song

sllo:

Super skibbidi sigma

Breathless:

Ur not sigma

sllo:

@breathless wrote:
Ur not sigma
Ur gay

Breathless:

So r u

sllo:

@breathless wrote:
So r u
Fair enough

ihy:

Good stuff!

Alanaaaaaaa:

thank you thank you

NeverEverDone:

this poem is really striking to me like i love love love the imagery you have use like the shadow of unyielding night and dreams dancing in silken light like it captures that deep sense of surrender and loss. the mix of hope and fear is super relatable too. you for sure have your ways with words lady but i like it so i give it a 7/10 :)

Alanaaaaaaa:

@nevereverdone wrote:
this poem is really striking to me like i love love love the imagery you have use like the shadow of unyielding night and dreams dancing in silken light like it captures that deep sense of surrender and loss. the mix of hope and fear is super relatable too. you for sure have your ways with words lady but i like it so i give it a 7/10 :)
omg tytyty

NeverEverDone:

@alanaaaaaaa wrote:
@nevereverdone wrote:
this poem is really striking to me like i love love love the imagery you have use like the shadow of unyielding night and dreams dancing in silken light like it captures that deep sense of surrender and loss. the mix of hope and fear is super relatable too. you for sure have your ways with words lady but i like it so i give it a 7/10 :)
omg tytyty
no problem! ^v^

forgetmylife:

Nice poem lana

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