Question

The darkest hour is nearing
In silence, we're drowning
Hear the knell of death draw nigh
Beneath the shattered heaven
Holding our faith
Through the tears, it shines
Only way out, but I don't wanna take it
Buried lie and we're too scared to shake it
Ooh, our fate is sinking
And this time we'll fight it
From up high, they jeer at our frailty
Burning lands not worth their empathy
But you can be my saving light
Strike like the thunder
Stay together
Burn up the fire
Never say never
Save us, save us
Saving light
Only way out, but I don't wanna take it
Buried lie, and we're too scared to shake it
Ooh, our fate is sinking
And this time we'll fight it
From up high, they jeer at our frailty
Burning lands not worth their empathy
But I can be your saving light
No more fear
We're ushering a new world
Revolution, it's our call
Tragedies in repetition
We'll show them how we defy
Shattering the darkness
I will lead you through the night
Together, face it
We will be the saving light

Answer 1

whoa that’s some deep stuff! It’s like a battle cry for a generation! but i love the poem so great job :3

Answer 2

Love, this is really good. Saving light is a really good song! Thank you for posting this darling, and remember, I'll always be here for you, no matter what. ❤

Answer 3

Your poem is powerful, capturing a struggle against darkness and fate. It starts with a sense of hopelessness but turns into a call for strength, unity, and defiance. The idea of becoming the saving light is inspiring, showing that even in our darkest moments, we can rise and lead. It’s a message of resilience and hope. Keep writing it’s truly impactful.

Answer 4

Nice Job!