Part Two..
When we arrived we found our hotel to be very neat and put together. We were very happy. The first thing we did was lock the door and lay in bed.
When we woke up I was excited. “Lake, let’s go outside!”
Previously, I had packed a “go bag”. It had a knife, gloves, a small rope, trash bags and duct tape, and a sharpie. I had asked him if we could go on a walk in the woods, of course he said yes. I put on the gloves, “so my hands wouldn’t get hurt.” I pretended to pack a few snacks and a bottle of water in my go bag.
We were in the middle of our walk when I stopped walking. I just stood there. He noticed, and came beside me. A few minutes before, I had stopped to “look at a flower”, though I really slid the knife up my sleeve. He’d asked me why I stopped.
“Lake, I really liked you. But you cheated, with Meaghan.” I smiled. “I answered the phone one day.”
He sighed and tried to hug me. I took the knife out and sighed. I slid it down his chest and stomach, not hard enough to hurt though. I could see the terror in his eyes.
The entire time, I was just concerned about losing my grip because of the gloves. Thankfully, I didn’t. He begged. “Please. Please- Amy we can talk about this! Meaghan meant nothing.”
“We talked. Better– we met up. She said you’d proposed.” I stopped with the knife in the center of his chest. He was about to speak, but I didn’t want to hear it. I plunged the knife deep into his chest. Blood splattered on me. He sputtered. Blood poured from his mouth.
The only word I could say? “Ew.”
I left the knife in, after making sure he was gone; couldn’t be found with the murder weapon on me. Then, I threw on a light shawl over my outfit, to be unsuspicious but to cover the blood. I flew home, burned my clothes from that night, and pretend nothing happened.
I told my parents and anyone else who asked that we had broken up. In November 2026, the police finally came to investigate me. They asked me how we’d met. He went to my highschool. They asked why we broke up. I told them about Meaghan and how I’d found out. They asked if we canceled our vacation to the Bahamas, I said no. We went on a trip to Texas, and he said he’d stay while I left after he broke my heart.
I was never caught.

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Part Two..
When we arrived we found our hotel to be very neat and put together. We were very happy. The first thing we did was lock the door and lay in bed. 
	When we woke up I was excited. “Lake, let’s go outside!”
	Previously, I had packed a “go bag”. It had a knife, gloves, a small rope, trash bags and duct tape, and a sharpie. I had asked him if we could go on a walk in the woods, of course he said yes. I put on the gloves, “so my hands wouldn’t get hurt.” I pretended to pack a few snacks and a bottle of water in my go bag. 
	We were in the middle of our walk when I stopped walking. I just stood there. He noticed, and came beside me. A few minutes before, I had stopped to “look at a flower”, though I really slid the knife up my sleeve. He’d asked me why I stopped. 
	“Lake, I really liked you. But you cheated, with Meaghan.” I smiled. “I answered the phone one day.”
	He sighed and tried to hug me. I took the knife out and sighed. I slid it down his chest and stomach, not hard enough to hurt though. I could see the terror in his eyes. 
	The entire time, I was just concerned about losing my grip because of the gloves. Thankfully, I didn’t. He begged. “Please. Please- Amy we can talk about this! Meaghan meant nothing.”
	“We talked. Better– we met up. She said you’d proposed.” I stopped with the knife in the center of his chest. He was about to speak, but I didn’t want to hear it. I plunged the knife deep into his chest. Blood splattered on me. He sputtered. Blood poured from his mouth.
	The only word I could say? “Ew.” 
	I left the knife in, after making sure he was gone; couldn’t be found with the murder weapon on me. Then, I threw on a light shawl over my outfit, to be unsuspicious but to cover the blood. I flew home, burned my clothes from that night, and pretend nothing happened.
	I told my parents and anyone else who asked that we had broken up. In November 2026, the police finally came to investigate me. They asked me how we’d met. He went to my highschool. They asked why we broke up. I told them about Meaghan and how I’d found out. They asked if we canceled our vacation to the Bahamas, I said no. We went on a trip to Texas, and he said he’d stay while I left after he broke my heart. 
	I was never caught.

MAGABACK · Answer

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