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forgetmylife:

Death is nothing at all. It does not count. I have only slipped away into the next room. Nothing has happened. Everything remains exactly as it was. I am I, and you are you, and the old life that we lived so fondly together is untouched, unchanged. Whatever we were to each other, that we are still. Call me by the old familiar name. Speak of me in the easy way which you always used. Put no difference into your tone. Wear no forced air of solemnity or sorrow. Laugh as we always laughed at the little jokes that we enjoyed together. Play, smile, think of me, pray for me. Let my name be ever the household word that it always was. Let it be spoken without an effort, without the ghost of a shadow upon it. Life means all that it ever meant. It is the same as it ever was. There is absolute and unbroken continuity. What is this death but a negligible accident? Why should I be out of mind because I am out of sight? I am but waiting for you, for an interval, somewhere very near, just round the corner. All is well. Nothing is hurt; nothing is lost. One brief moment and all will be as it was before.

forgetmylife:

Let me know if this sounds good

Alexander071105:

i love it

AcornTheNut:

It seems good to me, I didn't find any errors in your writing

GoatyGoat:

Good job nas I could tell this is a good poem

HotPockets14:

good poem

Skillzilla:

it's a powerful reminder that love and memories stay with us, even when someone is gone. it is comforting to think death as just a change, not a goodbye.

Dream12:

sounds really good better than mine at least..

Syrnn:

I really like it

Alanaaaaaaa:

I think it's cool how you wrote this, I think highly of death so like I can some what relate to this. I love it!

sllo:

WWW nas

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