Question

I wrote this song “naive hearts in the ignorant night” (it’s not the best)

Listen to me baby,
I will tell you what is going on in my head

There’s a small part of me saying

“Leave me alone,I’m okay”, But

Don’t worry

It’s just the voices in my head

Don’t wanna tell you every little thing
I don’t know why we can’t have what we need right now

So many times I’ve tried to explain this to you

But it gets so complicated and my head is spinning so much

I know you’re scared, Believe me

But trust when I say
You’re gonna hate me for telling you this

But I’ve thought about this for years

And I thought I’d have it all figured out by now

Ima naive fool

I’ve made mistakes and sometimes sound stupid

I’m just a ignorant fool

So stay up all night

We’ll figure this out together
I swear

I think I’m back where I started

Maybe I was too honest with you

Don’t wanna tell you everything

Cause baby if I talk to you I’d be telling you too much

So many times I tried to explain this too you

But it gets so complicated and my head is spinning so much. :)

Answer 1

Good Job! I love it!

Answer 2

👍🏼it’s not the best but it’s deserves gratitude

Answer 3

Lines 25 change "too" to "to"

Answer 4

WW