Question

Nobody knows it's empty,
The smile that I wear.
The real one is left behind in the past
Because I left you there...

Nobody knows I am crying.
They won't even see my tears.
When they think I am laughing,
I wish you were here...

Nobody knows it's painful.
They think that I am strong.
They say it won't kill me,
But I wonder if they are wrong...

Nobody knows I miss you.
They think I am all set free,
But I feel like I am bound with chains,
Trapped in the mystery...

Nobody knows I need you.
They think I can do it on my own,
But they don't know I am crying
When I am all alone...

Answer 1

sad but good.

Answer 2

not bad think it could use some rhyme sceam

Answer 3

Very sad poem, but I like the rhymes!

Answer 4

sad poem but its fire

Answer 5

good job!

Answer 6

whypyt this is fire

Answer 7

yes really

Answer 8

im in pain and u gonna it need more 🥲

Answer 9

nu im fine sigh~😅

Answer 10

nice how is it @aubree