Question

Did I cook with coming up with characters for my friends comic/fanfiction? (they dislike making characters so they asked me to make them for her)

MapleClan
Leader- BranchStar- tom, (dark gray long haired agouti), overweight, yellow eyes, 6 lives left, Dislikes HollyBurrow and PyreNose’s relationship 45 moons old
Deputy- HawkFall - Tom (brown long hair tabby tom) bright green eyes - a very agile cat what he lacks in strength he gets in agility. Very brave, and sly like a fox, very deep gruff voice. He can be manipulative at times, but tries to hide his ambition. 37 moons old
Medicine Cat-
FerretPine - tom, calico (base color black), orange eyes, very rude and hot- headed, used to be a warrior, dislikes kits and hates MousePatch, loves thrush and loves going to the creek near their clan territory to cool off. 58 moons old
GooseStream - Non-Binary (masc), white tickled tabby, jade eyes MapleClan Medicine cat apprentice. Doesn't talk much, introverted, kind, and soft spoken. (doesnt know MousePatch likes them) 20 moons old
Warriors-
PollenPelt - a small she-cat, very timid, (yellowish Balinese Munchkin), Crimson/ red eyes, very smart and loyal, terrified of failure and loves being praised by BranchStar, also terrified of HawkFall. 29 moons old
MousePatch - Tom, Gray agouti with blue eyes, MapleClan Warrior. VERY hyper and extroverted, plays pranks all the time, acts out to get GooseStreams attention (TOTALLY doesn't like them) MapleClans Leaders son 17 moons old
PyreNose - She-cat, calico (base color ginger) Dichroic eyes (orange and blue) MapleClan Warrior, doesn't realize when they are rude to ppl. 28 moons old
HollyBurrow - she-cat, hairless cat (gray), goldish eyes, mates with PyreNose, MapleClan Warrior, softly reminds PyreNose when they're rude. 23 moons old
DappledFeather - She-cat, Tortoiseshell (brown, cream and gray-ish? With sky blue eyes) - MapleClan warrior a very loyal she-cat, very rarely questions orders given to her will fight for her clan like a true warrior, she’s a very kind and soft spoken she-cat. Aro-Ace. (Or Aromantic Asexual lol) 21 moons old
FoggyCrest - tom, solid white long haired with icy blue eyes, kinda rude, 19 moons old
JackelFire - reddish orange medium length fur, white/normal eyes, has a pretty boy attitude, acts like he's better than everyone else, rather rude.


There is more but whatever lol.

Answer 1

this is super good so far!

Answer 2

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Answer 3

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