Question

I made a new song, but haven't recorded it yet but tell me what you think of the lyrics

You open up the storybook
You glance at the page and see once upon a time
The story starts with a young girl about the age of 10 with a happy family what is so wrong
You can’t see but
As the story
Progress how the girl turns out
It’s just a normal fairy tale to you

The girl is toxic
How you weren't expecting this
The girl is toxic
Every ounce of you wanted to run

Many years down the road and the girl is 15
She’s starting high school with the too-good-to-be-true boyfriend who it seems
The work
The fights
The scene
It's not the average book you’re looking at right now
Having depression
Having suicidal thoughts
Thought the knight in shiny armor would come to save her
Think again
But there is one thing that we know

The girl is toxic
How you weren't expecting this
The girl is toxic
Every ounce of you wanted to run
How this poor girl in this story is not the innocent that we are reading
Don’t you know that she’s toxic
The girl is toxic

Her mama sells drugs
Her daddy sells guns
Can you even do that without a license
Her mama sells guns
Her daddy sells guns

The girl is toxic
How you weren’t expecting this
The girl is toxic
Every ounce of you wanted to run
You open up the storybook not expecting that she was so dang toxic
The girl is toxic
The girl is toxic
The girl is

Answer 1

the lyrics are good. I like it. goodjob

Answer 2

this is amazing good job 🔥