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Strawberriesrgud7:

I wrote a poem for my English class. Rate it and tell me what you think! Stress I pretend like everything is ok I feel like I have weight being placed on my back each time I go through something I touch a barrier that doesn't allow me to cross it I worry that I will fall behind in life and that I'll never change I cry because I'm stressed about everything, thinking about how I'll never get stuff done and how I'll always fall behind in my classes I am ok..

1st4r:

its good I like it.

Strawberriesrgud7:

Thanks

Haleena:

RELATABLE

AcornTheNut:

last line is a bit dry but other than that's its great

Strawberriesrgud7:

Ok, thanks!

Jasonisyours:

It's outstanding def good

Strawberriesrgud7:

Thank you!

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