Question

I tried to tell you
Now it's too late
I sit waiting
At heaven's gate

He abused me, Mom
You never seemed to care
Now I lie in a black coffin
Full of despair

How many times
Did you hear me cry?
Did you ever think
It'd get so bad I'd die?

I am an angel now
With long white wings
Flying higher each day
No longer feeling his stings

I'll watch over you, Mom
Do what you didn't do for me
You pretended not to hear
Pretended not to see

Now you wait at heaven's gate
Just as I once did
You have now come to realize
The pain that I once hid

Answer 1

damn😭

Answer 2

The shiverssssss
Also, are you gonna actually use it for a song? Or you just wrote it as a poem and that's it?

Answer 3

trash

Answer 4

This is so raw and heartbreaking. It speaks volumes about pain and betrayal and the need for love If you wrote this, it’s powerful. I’m here if you need to talk about it like fr don't try to keep inside

Answer 5

good job

Answer 6

wowwww sooo deep!

Answer 7

this so so good. I'm in love w this u did such a good job. ur very talented !

Answer 8

W

Answer 9

keep doing whatever you doing

Answer 10

agreed

Answer 11

W fr. this poem hits