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Lilly2010:

Teenage love:by me In the glow of the moonlit sky, Two hearts beat soft, yet never shy. A glance exchanged, a secret smile, A love that lingers, pure and wild. The world feels big, but small, just then, When you’re lost in the thought of them. Words unsaid, but hearts understand, Every touch, like grains of sand. The thrill of firsts, the quiet talks, The midnight walks, the secret thoughts. Hand in hand, with no need to speak, For in each other's eyes, they seek. Teenage love, so raw, so new, A fleeting dream, yet always true. It’s in the laughter, the tears that fall, A love that feels like it could conquer all. But time moves on, as time must do, Yet memories linger, bright and true. For teenage love, though young and wild, Leaves behind a love, forever mild.

kristen000021:

this is cute

Lilly2010:

@kristen000021 wrote:
this is cute
thanks

ykbatman:

REal

ykbatman:

w song

ykbatman:

keep writing music frl

Syrnn:

I really like it but im saying this as constructive criticism but it feels like the rhythm of the song is very repetitive, and there's no chorus or bridge or anything, but other than that the lyrics are very well made such as "The world feels big, but small, just then, When you’re lost in the thought of them." but good job :)

pooperdooper:

this kinda sucks

friendly:

this good

Strawberriesrgud7:

This is really good, yet so true! Keep it up!

5StarRizz:

@pooperdooper wrote:
this kinda sucks
and your the one to talk with that username

euphoriiic:

gjj

Bounty:

wow

carry:

Teenage love more like teenage wasteland

carry:

It’s a song

carry:

Made by a band

carry:

I can’t rmb the band though

carry:

Good song however 🔥

ihy:

Keep doing what you do. Nice Job!

cherryblossom999:

teenage love>>>>

V4MPZSKII:

W

Gdub08:

This pretty good.. Keep it up.

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