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prettygirl666:

You touched me, I said no. Your hands on my body like knives slicing my skin. you would not stop. your skin felt like needles dragging across my ridged cold bod. you could have stopped. you could have given me mercy. you left me there to cry and bleed like a fountain of red blood in a snowy forest. so, tell me why you chose me. I was your blood, I loved you and you hurt me so bad I left my body that night. I have not returned. I will not return. my body has a sign on it that I can not repaint. I can not push you off. I cannot say what I have always wanted to say. I will never be the girl you used to know. I will be the girl who lost herself when she begged you as if you were a god. to stop and think about what you were doing. you pushed me to my limit and pretended I was nothing but an item. you could not look me in my eyes because if you did you would see the pain you have inflicted on me like a lost sheet of music that longs to be played but will never. I am damaged because of you and I do not mean damaged goods. I mean a damaged body. I will never be the same and you are to blame. so, tell me again that you wish we were not blood. I will always be your blood and wish you never touched me like we were not.

Nilae:

omg i feel this sm it makes me wanna cry i feel every word and it makes my heart ache because i've been through it and you're such a great writer and you have an unique way of expressing emotions.

prettygirl666:

@nilae wrote:
omg i feel this sm it makes me wanna cry i feel every word and it makes my heart ache because i've been through it and you're such a great writer and you have an unique way of expressing emotions.
thank you so much, if you ever want to talk then I am here. I am always here. I am so sorry that it happened to you and I wish it never was a thing. poetry is the best thing to help with trauma

xXAikoXx:

I don’t know if I should cry 😭

kristen000021:

this is a really good poem. I love the words you used. its very deep n nice.. I like it goodjob

xXAikoXx:

@xxaikoxx wrote:
I don’t know if I should cry 😭
I’m definitely going to cry omg

prettygirl666:

@xxaikoxx wrote:
I don’t know if I should cry 😭
lol sorry. I didn't think it was this sad until I read it outloud

prettygirl666:

@kristen000021 wrote:
this is a really good poem. I love the words you used. its very deep n nice.. I like it goodjob
thank you I appreciate it. I love this poem the most. I think this is myt new favorite

prettygirl666:

ahhh no cap these are my second and third medals ever even on the other accs I didnt have medals. woohoo

Syrnn:

This is truly beautiful work

prettygirl666:

thank you I appreciate it. this is my favorite and I am so excited to make more

Nilae:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
@nilae wrote:
omg i feel this sm it makes me wanna cry i feel every word and it makes my heart ache because i've been through it and you're such a great writer and you have an unique way of expressing emotions.
thank you so much, if you ever want to talk then I am here. I am always here. I am so sorry that it happened to you and I wish it never was a thing. poetry is the best thing to help with trauma
tysm that means a lot and yes it is i use it a lot to express my emotions because writing is the only way ik how

prettygirl666:

bruh u might be my favorite that has commented lol. like honestly you are cool. and yes I have so many poems I should maybe post here cuz gah damn I think people will relate. I love that you relate but my heart aches that you do

5StarRizz:

The first few lines hit harder than expected, but besides that, this shows a bunch of emotion good job on it.Keep up your writing their phenomenal.

prettygirl666:

thank you so much. I appreciate that. I think this poem is the most personal one I will write because I feel so open making it.

5StarRizz:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
thank you so much. I appreciate that. I think this poem is the most personal one I will write because I feel so open making it.
I used to do poems on my original account then I forgot the password lol

prettygirl666:

damn, I bet you were an amazing poet

5StarRizz:

But I would love to see more of them, you have incredible writing skills, very impressive and well-written.

5StarRizz:

ima look at my old poems i posted here

prettygirl666:

@5starrizz wrote:
But I would love to see more of them, you have incredible writing skills, very impressive and well-written.
thank you so much. I look forward to posting much more and showing them to you.

judethedude:

alright so

judethedude:

this is me before reading it

prettygirl666:

oki bet

Porque:

intense

prettygirl666:

@porque wrote:
intense
I know its a lil much but I love it lol

judethedude:

mb for being so harsh on you~

Bot1:

this is the most personal one ive seen, and its amazing

prettygirl666:

@judethedude wrote:
mb for being so harsh on you~
no don't be lol its ight

prettygirl666:

@bot1 wrote:
this is the most personal one ive seen, and its amazing
thank you this was the hardest to write considering I've never opened up about it to anyone but my case worker. I love this one tho

judethedude:

I'm jsp but it's good I really like how it drags the reader into it. made me think I was apart of the story which only good authors can make happen. congrats on a great writing!

Bot1:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
@bot1 wrote:
this is the most personal one ive seen, and its amazing
thank you this was the hardest to write considering I've never opened up about it to anyone but my case worker. I love this one tho
i love that you can open up to people about this, it lets others help you

prettygirl666:

@judethedude wrote:
I'm jsp but it's good I really like how it drags the reader into it. made me think I was apart of the story which only good authors can make happen. congrats on a great writing!
thank you I appreciate it. first compliment from you. thank you so much jude

prettygirl666:

@bot1 wrote:
@prettygirl666 wrote:
@bot1 wrote:
this is the most personal one ive seen, and its amazing
thank you this was the hardest to write considering I've never opened up about it to anyone but my case worker. I love this one tho
i love that you can open up to people about this, it lets others help you
yeah lol also puts my parents in prison but nah its all good lol

Bigmanny:

very intresting

Jasonisyours:

Crazyyy

prettygirl666:

@jasonisyours wrote:
Crazyyy
lol how

carry:

why didnt you just say "heyyyyy chimichanga"

prettygirl666:

huh lol

carry:

what?

prettygirl666:

@carry wrote:
why didnt you just say "heyyyyy chimichanga"
this?

carry:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
@carry wrote:
why didnt you just say "heyyyyy chimichanga"
this?
what about it?

sllo:

Sorry i js loved touching you

carry:

@sllo wrote:
Sorry i js loved touching you
this is real deep stuff i agree

Bot1:

its not

carry:

thats why were both standup comedians i have a netflix special coming out next month

@prettygirl666 wrote:
that's not funny honestly

carry:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
nah cuz like this is honest shi.
yeah im also being honest duder smh dont even believe in my dreams what a meaniepants

sllo:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
that's not funny honestly
I'm just an honest human, Search me up my name is "Jocky chang" I also have a youtube channel called "Childtoucher" Please check me out :)

carry:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
ok not funny dude. honestly
guys we have a hater but its okay im posting it about it on tiktok right now im getting u cancelled!

sllo:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
ok not funny dude. honestly
Hater alert! I'm posting you on my insta, and claiming that you touched me!!!

carry:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
stop please. stop saying that stuff
free speech this is america!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

sllo:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
stop please. stop saying that stuff
Your probably a Kamala Lover

prettygirl666:

I love not her but Jesus stop saying this or I'll report you

sllo:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
I love not her but Jesus stop saying this or I'll report you
Reporting someone because there exercising there freedom of speech?

prettygirl666:

no this poem was to help people not to let you make fun of rape

sllo:

@prettygirl666 wrote:
no this poem was to help people not to let you make fun of rape
When did I make fun of Rape?

prettygirl666:

literally saying u were gonna touch me

XxXGhostXxX:

💀

Kay06:

I felt every word of this, and I wouldn't wish this pain on my worst enemy. I'm sorry you went through this sweet girl

Skylar15:

"you touched me"

kristen000021:

@skylar15 wrote:
"you touched me"
ima touch u

Skylar15:

@kristen000021 wrote:
@skylar15 wrote:
"you touched me"
ima touch u
bet

MysticEcho:

This hits like a gut punch raw unfiltered and full of pain. 💔

randogirl123:

oo..i like thiss

Angel14125:

I'm so sorry that happen to you. It happened to me once.

grimreaper124:

sorry man

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