Question

Hello! this is my first song aka (very short song) I made this like 10 minutes ago, And only took like 30 min please let me know what you think

Answer 1

It's good

Answer 2

it's good :)

Answer 3

it's interesting, i say maybe work on the lyric's cause i get the theme of the song, just hard to really get into it. so just work on the lyric's also good skill's on the electric piano
but it's still good so far

Answer 4

its good!

Answer 5

Very interesting