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kazaktbone:

This is something I’m working on lmk how it is Really wanna rip my heart out, put it on the ice let it freeze. Take a ride in my mind let them bare their teeth. Sink your fang in my skin. Let me bleed for u. Put me on the cross hope I meet him. Feel the pressure around me till your ear bleed with ur scream. Look at my eyes tell me that I’m giving it all up and lock it away. Can’t even cry no more baby let me take ur pain away light it up like a joint inhale then relax into the abyss. Your name on my heart with your blood and let me bleed for you. Your ex was a mistake and I’ll shoot him down at the gun range and make it rain hell upon him. Let me lighten the load that you carry. We can go as high as the heaven gates and beyond. I’m lost in outer space and Im geeking at the moon

kristen000021:

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kazaktbone:

@kristen000021 wrote:
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Provide critical feedback. Yk I do this in a pretty vulnerable state

theydontknowally:

its good n relatable. esp the "Your ex was a mistake and I’ll shoot him down at the gun range ".🗣

kazaktbone:

thanks

ykbatman:

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ykbatman:

keep making more stuff bro

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