Question

Here is a song i've been working on.

Names shigaraki and ima run up you like I'm the one and only baki then hit you with some of zoros haki and then ima gonna burn your Pear like Dabi and come out like I'm the paparazzi cause you B!tches can't stop me.


(This was not my best work, give me your honest opinion, criticism is allowed(Don't over do it.)

Answer 1

Names shigaraki and ima run up you like I'm the one and only baki then hit you with some of zoros haki and then ima gonna burn your @ss like Dabi and come out like I'm the paparazzi cause you B!tches can't stop me.

Answer 2

@arco1435 what do you think of it so far?

Answer 3

i think this has a good topic to it and it's a good but i don't think your gonna beat anyone @ss you seem like a dude who talks $hit but you don't do $hit

Answer 4

um.... this doesn't speak english to me.

Answer 5

me neither

Answer 6

it makes zero sense