Question

this is a poem I worked on today! any advice?

Upon the stem, so pure and fair,
A bloom of snow, beyond compare.
White roses whisper, soft and true,
Of gentle grace in pearly hue.

Beneath the sun, they softly gleam,
A fleeting touch of nature's dream.
Their petals fold in silken grace,
A tranquil sigh in time's embrace.

No scarlet blaze, no golden fire,
Yet they inspire the soul's desire.
For in their quiet, tender bloom,
They hold the stillness of the moon.

White roses speak of love refined,
A sacred bond, a peaceful mind.
They carry peace through every breeze,
And soothe the heart with tender ease.

So let them bloom, serene and bright,
A symbol of the purest light.
White roses, soft as morning dew,
Forever timeless, ever true.

Answer 1

It's great, I love the ryhmes at the end of each stanza. Wonderful Job!

Answer 2

I tried TnT

Answer 3

It's good

Answer 4

No advice. keep it da way it is.

Answer 5

tyyyyy!

Answer 6

You are a star

Answer 7

oh- why ty!

Answer 8

OMG BAE THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE IT

Answer 9

AHHHH TYYYY

Answer 10

fire

Answer 11

10/10

Answer 12

I love it sm
yw

Answer 13

wowwy bowwy

Answer 14

ai core?

Answer 15

OMG tyyy for all the luv AHHHHHHHHHH < 3 I did have some help with the rymes tho!

Answer 16

who helped you

Answer 17

my aunts a wrighter and she helped me

Answer 18

ooo nice

Answer 19

Once upon a time there was a horse.. A horse named Norse, he got killed by the hunters and died. By Ray Bradbury. Fw it

Answer 20

oh frl😭