Question

I'm writing a song. Are these lyrics weird?
I saw your face yesterday in the park
Kind of sad looking at it from here
So I kept it so it won’t be lost
I have a secret
You cannot keep
You look so sad
It’s pitiful
So I’ll tell you
This once
Guess what

I am a bird
I’m super high
I’m in the sky
I’m a bird
I’m in the sky
I’m super high
Yes I am a bird
I’m super fly
Cuz’ I fly high
You should watch out
I’m a bird
A bird
I’m a bird

Saw you walking with your family
Is that mom’s replacement
Where is me
Is she hurting you the way I did
But no
You had to go
And stab me in the back
Guess what now I’m famous
I wrote a song
I hope you're proud
I made it just for you
It’s really cool
I hope you like it
It’s called

I’m a bird
I am a bird
A colorful bird
Guess what Dad I’m a bird
And I flew high up in the sky
I’m a f**ing bird
Then I flew high
Higher than you
That’s cause I’m a bird
My wings are long
It’s super long
I’m a bird
A bird
I’m a bird
A bird
I’m a bird

So no
I won’t get treated this way
I’m much more valuable than you
You pushed me down the steps
You broke your leg pushing me down the stairs
I’m 40 times better than you
Scratch that
I’m 100 times better than you
That’s because

I’m a f**ing bird
A fast one and a strong one
Guess what Dad I’m a mockingbird
Go back to your hive
You’re just a bee
I’m a shinny a** bird (I’m not a pig)
A colorful one (I’m not a goat)
And I flew high (Up in the sky)
Can you see me
Now I am a bird
Mom
Once dad comes
Tell him that
I’m a F**ing bird

Answer 1

Lovely poem