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here's 2 poems that were recommended!! hope you like them <3

1. a poem about losing yourself completely for people, by iheartcoconut21

I gave my light to those in need,
A flicker dimmed to feed their greed.
Piece by piece, my heart grew bare,
A selfless act, but none were aware.

I wore their dreams like borrowed clothes,
Fitting snug where my own soul froze.
Their laughter echoed, sweet and strong,
While my own voice became a song.

I danced in rhythms not my own,
A puppet pulled by threads unknown.
Their battles fought, their burdens shared,
Yet no one asked how much I cared.

The mirror's face, a stranger's gaze,
A hollow mask in endless haze.
Where once I stood, so bold, so free,
Now shadows whispered, “Where is she?”

But even shadows long to fade,
To rest beneath the life they’ve made.
And so I gather what remains,
To stitch the pieces, heal the pains.

For losing self is not the end,
It’s where the broken start to mend.
A lesson learned, a truth so clear:
To love yourself is to reappear.

"I gave my all, my every part,
To mend their world, to heal their heart.
A mirror cracked, no face to see,
I lost myself in serving thee.

Their joy became my only flame,
Till none was left to bear my name.
But in the void, a truth now rings:
You can't pour love from empty springs."

2. was a poem about a poem on the beautiful night sky, by forgetmylife, or should I say Nas

The night sky stretches, vast and deep,
A cradle where the heavens sleep.
Stars, like diamonds, gently gleam,
Lighting paths to every dream.

The moon, a guardian, soft and wise,
Glides silently through velvet skies.
Her silver glow, serene and kind,
A beacon for the wandering mind.

The constellations softly trace
A story told in cosmic grace.
Heroes and lovers, gods of old,
In starlit whispers, their tales unfold.

Each twinkling star, a fleeting light,
A memory carved into the night.
Infinite, timeless, boundless, free,
A glimpse of pure eternity.

Oh, night so still, so wondrous high,
You hold the secrets of the sky.
A gentle song, a quiet plea,
To lose oneself in your mystery.

I enjoyed making these today!

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