Question

Can somebody rate my essay for rn??

Northern Ghost Bat Research

The Northern Ghost bat is a bat usually found in South America there are more than Thousand Ghost bats in the world. These Ghost bats are most known for their White fur, Big wingspan, Large ears and their big eyes. “What do they eat?” Well they mostly prey on moths very different from the Regular Ghost bat. Regular ghost bats eat large invertebrates, Lizards, Birds, Rodents AND even Other bats! These Ghost bats usually Roost in Caravans, in the open or in palm trees. Females give birth to only one young during July to September. “Do they bite?” They swoop on their prey killing with powerful bites. Ghost bats make noises like Purr, Click and Buzzing often precede mating of some species, Ghost bats live up to 20 years. Bats can also hear with their mouth and nose.

Answer 1

hm

Answer 2

6/10 cause an essay isnt one paragraph

Answer 3

oh ok

Answer 4

mid

Answer 5

You're off to a great start! I like how you noted what the ghost bats are known for. Maybe also include what their habit looks like, or even where there found! Other than that, great job!!

Answer 6

I agree with chloe, but there are few spots that can be touched up on. c:

Answer 7

I noticed you have some unnecessarily capitalized words in your paragraph. Like "purr", "click", "buzzing", and you don't need to capitalize the name of the animal. It's just "ghost bat", unless the sentence starts with it, then you capitalize the G.

Answer 8

"The Northern Ghost bat is a bat usually found in South America there are more than Thousand Ghost bats in the world." can be corrected into:

"A northern ghost bat is usually seen in South America. The are more than one thousand of them in the world."

You were missing punctuation and had some structural errors in your sentences. Always make sure you edit before sharing! :3

I only marked up the first sentence, splitting it into two.

Answer 9

I rate it a 6 right now because of the errors but I can see the potential in it! Plus I've never heard of a northern ghost bat before! I'd love to see how it turns out for you. (:

Answer 10

5/10, you can do better. Get grammarly !

Answer 11

4/10

Answer 12

needs improving

Answer 13

9/10

Answer 14

Definitely
a good start so about 9.5

Answer 15

Good Job

Answer 16

Not bad not bad

Answer 17

This is a good start for an essay.
One thing I noticed is you are inconsistent with your capitalization of the bat. You have "Ghost Bat" in your title and then "Ghost bat" throughout the rest.
Also, you have questions in your paragraph such as "Do they bite?" and then you proceed to answer. I would say that we should work on incorporating that question into a sentence that could possibly be a new paragraph. If that won't work, you could make a paragraph specifically about the behaviors of the Ghost Bat, and then include that information (we could work on this together if you'd like).
You also share quite a bit of information, but there is no reference as to where you got this information (should always include an in-text citation or give credit to the author when using information that is not your own)

Overall, the topic seems rather interesting, and could be turned into a GREAT essay (:

Answer 18

Nice

Answer 19

Good Job Elmo