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Twaylor:

Song update 2.0 Hail Deep within the mountain keep, Hail your dreams, you may weep, Hail fire, crown, and gold, In these dreams of old. Hidden in the cloudless shade, Deep within Isildur's bane, All your plans will go to vain. Echoes of an ancient lore, Whispers from the days of yore, Guardians watch with eyes aflame, Calling forth the brave to claim. Secret paths and river's bend, Through the mist where shadows blend, Rising winds of fate and chance, Guide your heart in this dark dance. Silence holds the echoes tight, Stepping forth from endless night, Hail the courage, brave and bold, In these dreams, let truth unfold.

axie:

I feel like I’m about to accept a quest that’s potentially life altering

Twaylor:

@axie wrote:
I feel like I’m about to accept a quest that’s potentially life altering
t- thats the point holy moly

axie:

So I win?

Twaylor:

y u s

Twaylor:

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axie:

Yay !

Twaylor:

u won, u made me happy for the first time in like a week...

jjbruh:

i likey :)

jjbruh:

10 hocktuha/ 10 hocktuha

semilore:

10/10

Glorious:

10/10

Gdub08:

I feel like their should be 1 more line in the second stanza, but other than that, this is really good.

fwval:

10/10

fwval:

good job

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