Question

Here's a poem/song I wrote. It's called "I'm Missing You Again":

I'm missing you again
I never thought I would
If I could see your face
Maybe I could change
The way I view my pain

If only I could see
What you see in me
I could understand
Why you are my friend

You help me when I'm down
You help me when I'm blue
You're always there for me
No matter what I do

All the memories we hold
Will be there when we're old

When I saw your face
I knew you were the change
I needed in my life
But now

I'm missing you again
I never thought I would
If I could see your face
Maybe I could change
The way I view my pain

If only I could see
What you see in me
I could understand
Why you are my friend

You are there for me
I am there for you
I know this is true
No matter what we do

I remember the day
We became friends
I was really shy
But you did not mind

I never would've been
Where I'm at now
If it wasn't for you
Doing what you do

I'm missing you again
I never thought I would
If I could see your face
Maybe I could change
The way I view my pain

If only I could see
What you see in me
I could understand
Why you are my friend


(Written on 05-26-2020)

Answer 1

10/10

Answer 2

Keep up the great work!

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Aw, this is nice. 9/10

Answer 5

this kinda sucks cause it’s repetitive but whatever man if that was the point of it, 6 apples/2 chairs

Answer 6

Not my type of poem so ima say like....6/10 bc its not that goot to me

Answer 7

good*

Answer 8

Really good jobbbb. You did very well. Keep up the good work. Maybe you'll become a poet one day 🙃🙂

Answer 9

Www