This is a song I wrote, what do y'all think?
juice wrld
I started cause of you,
before you,
had me feeling hella blue,
nothing to do with nothing to lose,
raised me up flying so high,
don't need no drugs when listenin,
I could touch the sky,
your such a good guy,
i'm always viewed as the bad guy,
but I don't wanna be... the bad guy,
(sigh)
to bad I'll never get to meet you, greet you,
tell you how much I wanna be you,
yea I'm on green to (y'all know what I mean)
never been on lean gimmie a vaccine,
feelin unclean.
between you and me,
I love him,
id give my whole life for him,
I think we can all agree we miss you,
and nah it ain't the codeine or the weed,
you knew your lyrics could save us,
let us raise our hands,
continue to sing and dance,
forever,
legends never die,
have to put this in here,
anime thighs,
you're sublime

Question

This is a song I wrote, what do y'all think?
juice wrld
I started cause of you,
before you,
had me feeling hella blue,
nothing to do with nothing to lose,
raised me up flying so high,
don't need no drugs when listenin,
I could touch the sky,
your such a good guy,
i'm always viewed as the bad guy,
but I don't wanna be... the bad guy,
(sigh)
to bad I'll never get to meet you, greet you, 
tell you how much I wanna be you,
yea I'm on green to (y'all know what I mean)
never been on lean gimmie a vaccine,
feelin unclean. 
between you and me,
I love him,
id give my whole life for him,
I think we can all agree we miss you,
and nah it ain't the codeine or the weed,
you knew your lyrics could save us,
let us raise our hands, 
continue to sing and dance,
forever,
legends never die, 
have to put this in here, 
anime thighs,
you're sublime

XxXGhostXxX · Answer

for speaking facts ight :)

Cloud4444 · Answer

WoW 😮 it’s terrible…….. really …….

korbie · Answer

@cloud4444 wrote:

WoW 😮 it’s terrible…….. really …….

oh, why everyone hatin, y'all ain't even heard the beat to it ;-;

korbie · Answer

@cloud4444 @xxxghostxxx y'all didn't even read it bruh ;-;

Cloud4444 · Answer

@xxxghostxxx wrote:

i read the first 3 lines n could tell

I didn’t even read it and I know it sux

VaehVaehVaeh · Answer

It's not bad. Why did EVB say sum BS in the comments? He did better than you could, BFRL. I think if you put the right beat and have the right voice, it wouldn't be bad.

korbie · Answer

@vaehvaehvaeh wrote:

It's not bad. Why did EVB say sum BS in the comments? He did better than you could, BFRL. I think if you put the right beat and have the right voice, it wouldn't be bad.

thanks twin, I come up with this off my dome, I do it with all my music, still looking for the right beat tho, also those ppl in the comments are my friend they chill lol

Miriii · Answer

The lyrics are 🔥!

korbie · Answer

@miriii wrote:

The lyrics are 🔥!

thank you

Miriii · Answer

U should definitely put it on nna track

korbie · Answer

@miriii wrote:

U should definitely put it on nna track

I'm just looking for the right beat rn, buh im fs gonna do it

Miriii · Answer

Good. Lmk

korbie · Answer

@miriii wrote:

Good. Lmk

ill send it as soon as I finish it

Miriii · Answer

I definitely wanna hear it

korbie · Answer

@miriii wrote:

I definitely wanna hear it

ion think my voice is right for it tho, so I might have someone else sing it fr

VaehVaehVaeh · Answer

@korbie wrote:

@vaehvaehvaeh wrote:

It's not bad. Why did EVB say sum BS in the comments? He did better than you could, BFRL. I think if you put the right beat and have the right voice, it wouldn't be bad.

thanks twin, I come up with this off my dome, I do it with all my music, still looking for the right beat tho, also those ppl in the comments are my friend they chill lol

myf myf

korbie · Answer

@vaehvaehvaeh wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@vaehvaehvaeh wrote:

It's not bad. Why did EVB say sum BS in the comments? He did better than you could, BFRL. I think if you put the right beat and have the right voice, it wouldn't be bad.

thanks twin, I come up with this off my dome, I do it with all my music, still looking for the right beat tho, also those ppl in the comments are my friend they chill lol

myf myf

what ;-;

VaehVaehVaeh · Answer

@korbie wrote:

@vaehvaehvaeh wrote:

@korbie wrote:

@vaehvaehvaeh wrote:

It's not bad. Why did EVB say sum BS in the comments? He did better than you could, BFRL. I think if you put the right beat and have the right voice, it wouldn't be bad.

thanks twin, I come up with this off my dome, I do it with all my music, still looking for the right beat tho, also those ppl in the comments are my friend they chill lol

myf myf

what ;-;

nun

XxXGhostXxX · Answer

@vaehvaehvaeh wrote:

It's not bad. Why did EVB say sum BS in the comments? He did better than you could, BFRL. I think if you put the right beat and have the right voice, it wouldn't be bad.

better than who