another poem for yall to rate.. (its a personal one)

walking down the halls
feeling scared but not overwhelmed
yelling in a home that I felt safe
before it became so small
making me feel so dumb because I cant do small things
but I'm just a kid so why am I the problem?
i cant even, smile ... without second guessing..

Question

another poem for yall to rate.. (its a personal one)

walking down the halls
feeling scared but not overwhelmed
yelling in a home that I felt safe
before it became so small
making me feel so dumb because I cant do small things
but I'm just a kid so why am I the problem?
i cant even, smile ... without second guessing..

Graysonunderwoods · Answer

could use some work,just keep working on it,and ignore crumb he mad his pp small (jk)

jinxthelovely · Answer

@crumbcrumbington wrote:

Horrible, bro is NOT Taylor swift.

bro... no body cares about your trashy opinion..... fr like all you wanna do is be mean so you can feel better about yourself bc you know you cant be anything more than a bully,

jinxthelovely · Answer

@graysonunderwoods wrote:

could use some work,just keep working on it,and ignore crumb he mad his pp small (jk)

thanks...it was a personal poem about my family issues... and he made me feel really invalid..

CrumbCrumbington · Answer

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@crumbcrumbington wrote:

Horrible, bro is NOT Taylor swift.

bro... no body cares about your trashy opinion..... fr like all you wanna do is be mean so you can feel better about yourself bc you know you cant be anything more than a bully,

You literally asked me to rate it.

jinxthelovely · Answer

@crumbcrumbington wrote:

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@crumbcrumbington wrote:

Horrible, bro is NOT Taylor swift.

bro... no body cares about your trashy opinion..... fr like all you wanna do is be mean so you can feel better about yourself bc you know you cant be anything more than a bully,

You literally asked me to rate it.

that does not mean you have to be a complete downer about it....

Graysonunderwoods · Answer

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@graysonunderwoods wrote:

could use some work,just keep working on it,and ignore crumb he mad his pp small (jk)

thanks...it was a personal poem about my family issues... and he made me feel really invalid..

trust me u aint,just take you time making another,and you'll def do 20x better,prob enough to be a good poet

CrumbCrumbington · Answer

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@crumbcrumbington wrote:

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@crumbcrumbington wrote:

Horrible, bro is NOT Taylor swift.

bro... no body cares about your trashy opinion..... fr like all you wanna do is be mean so you can feel better about yourself bc you know you cant be anything more than a bully,

You literally asked me to rate it.

that does not mean you have to be a complete downer about it....

Its honesty

jinxthelovely · Answer

@crumbcrumbington wrote:

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@crumbcrumbington wrote:

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@crumbcrumbington wrote:

Horrible, bro is NOT Taylor swift.

bro... no body cares about your trashy opinion..... fr like all you wanna do is be mean so you can feel better about yourself bc you know you cant be anything more than a bully,

You literally asked me to rate it.

that does not mean you have to be a complete downer about it....

Its honesty

you can be honest without making someone feel horrible! it was a personal poem about my family issues rn and you just made me feel so invalid.

SaltySuga · Answer

I kinda don't like it tho

Sleep · Answer

I feel like you could use more unique wording

jinxthelovely · Answer

@sleep wrote:

I feel like you could use more unique wording

ok. thx.

jinxthelovely · Answer

@saltysuga wrote:

I kinda don't like it tho

thanks for the opinion..and not being overly rude abt it, like SOMEONE

SaltySuga · Answer

@jinxthelovely wrote:

@saltysuga wrote:

I kinda don't like it tho

thanks for the opinion..and not being overly rude abt it, like SOMEONE

👀

NaiNoah · Answer

this is great

jinxthelovely · Answer

@nainoah wrote:

this is great

thanks.

theydontknowally · Answer

aww ifyy, 9/10

Cloud4444 · Answer

To be honest with you, I don’t really understand what’s being expressed in this

fwval · Answer

a lil more work but its good