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Another poem
thoughts... Please

Give me the gun (the first)
Before… i wanted it to stop but- the voices go on whispering and taunting
Give me the gun
They nudge on me to put an end to it all
Give me the gun
And here i am aching to listen to them
Give me the gun
Dying to just give in
Give me the gun
They don’t scream
Give
Or shout
Me
Their more like a gentle caress
The
Something more soothing and… persuasive
Gun
And in the end… they always win
‘BANG’


In the silence (the second)
The story of silence is the most powerful of all

                                                                      because its the words that are left unsaid that are the most important and meaningful 

                                                             Like the wind blowing 

                                    and the snow falling 

                                                          and the crickets singing 

Each having their own story to tell

                                                                                                If you'll only listen hard enough

Answer 1

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Answer 2

SO PWEETTTYYY

Answer 3

and interesting

Answer 4

but yeah

Answer 5

XD ywww

Answer 6

yeah but dark can be interestingly cool👌

Answer 7

ANYWAYSSS

Answer 8

Have a good dayyy

Answer 9

its so good its a nice one

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yw

Answer 11

so cool

Answer 12

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Answer 13

trash

Answer 14

I love it

Answer 15

Great Job!

Answer 16

this is very good. the first I feel like i've heard sum similar, its good tho. I love both of them

Answer 17

w poem

Answer 18

Good Job. 8/10