Question

here's another poem I made a few days ago

They say happiness will find you,
But I think sadness will find you too,
It sneaks up on you in darkness,
Just when you think you’ve made it through,
It opens holes in what was solid ground,
The kind you never know are there,
Until you go to take another step,
And find you’re standing over the air,
The world around you passes by,
In blurs of colour and sound,
Nothing around you making sense,
As you continue your plummet down,
You can’t remember how it started,
And you don’t know when it will end,
But you know that you’d give anything,
To stand up on your feet again,
Sadness is that feeling,
When the falling doesn’t stop,
And it saps your life of meaning,
And of the good things that you’ve got,
So when you finally hit rock bottom,
And you look back up at the sky,
What you once had seems so far away,
The only thing left to do is cry,
People all yell out save yourself,
Calling things about happiness and hope
But they’re too busy with their lives to realise,
It’d be a lot quicker if they let down a rope.

Answer 1

Very sentimental, I'm 12 and this is deep.

Answer 2

I can tell you chose the words in your poem carefully. 👏

Answer 3

What else? 🤣

Answer 4

I’m saying you did a good job

Answer 5

I read it wrong, I thought u said I SHOULD choose my words wisely lmao

Answer 6

Oh

Answer 7

W

Answer 8

this would be a great poem youve made if it wasnt plagiarized word for word.

https://inspiration.allwomenstalk.com/when-sadness-finds-you-by-erin-hanson/

Answer 9

uh oh

Answer 10

Wow so deep, Who Hurt You!

Answer 11

I gave credit where credit was due

Answer 12

Just as i read the 4th Line, It hit me That is So true abt life